This good, i had to read it a couple of times but i got it in the end. It gets to the point gradrally whicjh is nice very good. I dont like the italian bit write it in english (No Offense)

Wow this poem was great! Top notch I think, I loved the italian, lol since I am half italian. I couldn't have said anything more beautiful myself. Keep it up! xxx

I thought this poem was good and i liked how u tried something different by pitting another language in it!! Taking a risk is a good thing in my opionon it shows that your willing to try new things and become a better writter (not that your not good cause you are).. I definetly think that one day i will see your work published!!Wonderful!! 5/5!! Thanks for entering my contest!! Nice flow by the way!!

This is a pretty good poem.
it made me smile =]

Bad r u kiddin??... um hellooo its awesome!!!.. wow i liked how u put a different language into it.. n u explained ur feelings really good!!!.. its a awesome poem!!! xoxo -jennifer

Bad r u kiddin??... um hellooo its awesome!!!.. wow i liked how u put a different language into it.. n u explained ur feelings really good!!!.. its a awesome poem!!! xoxo -jennifer

Wow thats amazing
can u read my poem
i'm just a shadow

Man..shyt like that wins my heart over...5/5

This good!! great emotion!!!
~shanny~