Kewl, and good job
...mia...

This is my favorite so far, i reallly liked the idea, your last stanzas are usually my favorite, and it still is....5/5 i like how you keep them more short...
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This has to be my favourite, a perceptive write. The difficulties of finding yourself amongst hypocrites- most people will relate. Spot on

Screw society. Be what you want to be.