Comments : I AM

  • 18 years ago

    by LifeThroughMyEyes

    I like how it repeats.
    i also think that you can do ne thing that u put ur mind to.
    :D
    Mary

  • 18 years ago

    by Raychil

    I really liked the repetitive ending for each stanza and they way that you really showed your determination. Very good. I hope you keep writing :).