by Katz
Great poem, I love it! |
by Lovely Bones
You are an excellent writer.. how could you say otherwise? (based on your profile) I loved this poem. You express yourself so well. I lvoe the flow and repitition of this poem. Especially where you said "My lips now have someone to kiss.. My heart has someone to miss" (sorry if I got that wrong) I love that. Something I would like to feel myself, yet that's gonna be a while I'm afraid =) |