by Jordan
I like that you made two endings, that way you can take the poem into your own head and run with it. I just wanted to say thanks for commenting on my cutting poem. I do have to put on that face...because else then Id be exposed ya know? Anyways good poem. |
by uponfairywings
Aw I like this poem, you did a great job. |
by chris
Love the alternate endings and the conflict there between telling the truth and not. the battles in our heads like that are often the hardest |
by Mar
I like the secxond ending better ! |
This is a really awesome poem thankks for the comment on minee. yeahh ive quit for a month or maybe more now maybe 2. it feels good to not do it even tho im tempted too. i partly dont do it b/c i have to work now and i can but w/e the reason im glad i dont. i hope you quitt tooo |