Comments : Pain

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Wow.. very deep.. I hope that you don't really feel this way. But great poem, its very emotional. Keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by ~Thorns On My Grave~

    Wow, I really liked it, especially the line "I'll be on the floor dead in the puddle of my pain." I feel your pain.