by XxCatherinexX Jun 3, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
That fake smile that I put on my face, every hour. Nobody can see the real me. The long sleeves that I wear make people wonder, but what do they care. Do they know how do hide themselves under the moonlight? |
by Theoretical Thespian
It's...okay...but I feel that your structure needs more work. It's more like bland-ish prose, not poetry. |