thanks for your comment haidi and if u ahve a look under my name u'll see i have more!
jemma xx

hey yeah u rate my poem and i will rate urs.... 5/5! good job!

Jemma-
I am glad to hear a poem w/out ryhme in it. You have done well. ALso...i can relate to your poem because I feel that way right NOW! lol but sad... I really like this poem.
ashley b

well thought out poem and well written.Great job.FIVE!

Hiya this poem was realy good, It was obviously strait out of your heart and I think that is the best kinda poetry, your a great poet, keep at it I definatly give it a 5 stars!

THIS POEM IS REALL GOOD GIRL AND IT SEEMED LIKE IT CAME STR8 FROM THE HEART

This was a good poem. Poems dont have to rhyme, ones that dont rhyme can be just as good or better than ones that do (hehe almost all of mine dont rhyme). Ohh ya and i can totally relate to all this right now. I am also so confused on what i feel about this guy and am trying to figure out my feelings. Wishing you (and me) luck

Good job, poems don't have to rhyme...they are just expressions of emotions. No one individual can set a guideline on how a poem must be written. It is only a release for the poet's heart.

A poem with or without rhyme, is still a poem and you were able to make the reader feel as if they are the writer, if you know what I mean. anyways good job and keep it up

great poem. hope to read more soon

best of wishes, good luck, and much more,
Ashley