Wow, go innocence, you really caught the ideals of innocence and everything child like
GOOD JOB

...mia...

Your a very good poet....it's a nice thought to believe you can still be innocent but i think to be innocent you have to also be very partially naive...

Outside in my sleeping gown tonight.
And I realize,
All is not lost.

that was my favorite line because it was like once you think about it and let yourself ignore all the bad things (which again means you have to be naive) but anyways, once you can ignore the bad things you realize this world isn't all bad and people and things can be good and happy

5/5

Very sweet, yet very good! 5/5 Keep up the good work!

-Stephanie-

Hey Kat- Alot of Spelling Errors here....Eh i dont like it but it's good haha. i commented you...

\5/5\

xLauren/3

Knowing is half the battle. Great work.