Indescribable

by PygmyPuff   Jun 4, 2006


The glory that comes with friendship,
Can never be lost.
The pleasure inside grows,
With each time together is spent.

Forever loyal at any cost.
A commitment only the holder knows,
Is strong to be never bent;
To be honoured at whole until the end.

The visible acts of kindness shows,
But the meaning was never meant,
To be only interpreted by the friend.
Outsiders can only hope for it someday.

A shoulder to cry on when you need to vent,
When your torn heart is in need of a mend,
it is offered immediately with no delay.
Services so valuable, yet always free.

Seal it tight, add a stamp, its ready to send.
To you my life has been casted away.
For infinity shall our friendship be,
Unbreakable, undeniable, Indescribable.

**This poem has a difficult rhyme scheme. Its ABCD BCDE CDEF DEFG EFGH. It took a while to get lines that made sense but also followed this form**

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  • 18 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    The friendship, poem and form was beautiful. I am glad you took the extra time needed to write it.

  • 18 years ago

    by StefQ

    This should have been very difficult to write with the hard rhyme scheme and all but ytou did an amazing job, you made a beautiful poem ! it's just sad that some poeple rate it low when it surely deserves a 5/5

    ~StefQ

  • 18 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    This poem is really good. I'm sure that the rhyme scheme was difficult, but it's alright. If you want to improve it, you should just think what you're not sure about and change it.

    Good job!

    Keep writing.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    I liked this, i couldn't follow the rhyme scheme..i wouldn't have known there was one if you didn't say so...but i really liked your word choice and how everything flows...the last stanza is the best and you couldn't have ended it better which i think is skill because i can't end poems for anything... awesome whoever gave this a 3.0 was just jealous!! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ღHazel_Kittenღ

    OOO, your good, I could never do that EVER

    ...mia...

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