Aww i really liked ur poem its really sad but the sad part is ,is there are ppl like her dad that do that kinda stuff but i really liked how well u worded ur really good dont be a stranger 5/5 always
kate

Great poem.it hit me hard, cos i no i would hate to be in that situation.makes u realise wat pple r goin thro.def 5.

U have a lot of talent keep it up k
Jennifer