Aw wow. This was really sweet. Great imagrey. I could imagine 2 people together. It was cute. And also very good poem. I liked it alot ^_^ Tehe.
5/5

.x.TaLeEe.x.

P.S. Could you please r/r/c my new poem. It's a love one lol. Thank you if you do =P

WOW. I LOVE this poem and the imagery and the flow and the words you used ot describe it... I loved everything about this poem! Especially this stanza:

"The sapphire sky looked down
At the pair of love struck lovers
Intertwined in the sparkling grass
With only beautiful smells,
Warm sunlight,
And their undying love,
To cover them.."

The line that really caught my attention and my heart was "The sapphire sky looked down"

WOW

WOW

WOW

haha I seriously can't get over it.. I'm in complete and utter awe.. speechless, although it may not seem like it at this second lol.

LOVED IT!!!!

There's just one thing tho, in the second last stanza the word, it should be "perfectness" .. one word insteado f two ;P

Lovely.. Lovely poem. My ultimate dream..

*to

*of

;P

Just excellent

5/5

love
amy

I thought it was well written, you'll do well in the contest. I really liked the imagery and they words used. well done
xxxxx

How love should be :),brings a smile when you think about such moments,
and that is worth alot in a poem , if it can make ppl smile and think about the sweetness of love
keep it up :)

Great poem. the imagery is great and the flow works. Good luck in the contest you should do really well

Beautiful imagery and word choice. A very calm, enjoyable poem. Though you can still work on the flow.

The description is what does it for me you had such detailed description that made me invision this summer day i loved it and i felt the passion between the love struck lovers keep me posted with your stuff i love it!!

keep the talent keep the faith keep the ability to write beautifully

laura

Hm, that was totally awesome I really liked it, I don't usually read poems that don't rhyme cuz they lose their flow but you did a wonderful job in keeping a rhythm that pulls the readier along
Great Job
...mia...

Great Job! I Told you I'd read your poem on your post thing. It was VERY beautiful. Keep it up.

Aww this is really cute. : ) i love it.