Trails of My life

by LadyPearl   Jun 4, 2006


Eyes of burning fire
Hair of streaking gold
A world where shadows lurk
Where hearts are freezing cold

Welcome to my life
Where demons roam for free
Where fallen angels cry
Grasping for my knees

Tis the world where I stumble
Blindly through and through
Bleeding from unseeing wounds
Who would have knew

Everytime a step was taken
It crumbled beneath in dust
Everything I've won and loved
Now survives on broken trust

I cleansed my eyes from black tears
Hoping to find some light
Yet the darkness won't let me go
And I remain to fight this fight

Standing alone in a confused daze
Wondering what's left of me
Whether I was still that person I was
Or a child broken and empty

This is world in which you gaze upon
Shattered by all my remorse
Here is where eternity takes it's toll
Drifting, waiting, forever henseforth

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Wow.. another excellent poem, the poems on this site just seem to be getting better and better.. this was very very good.. i loved it! you used great metaphors, your rhymes were good, and there was yet again, so much emotion! the only problem i found was here ::

    Who would have knew
    ^ here, "knew" doesn't really make sense, even though it does rhyme..

    all in all, excellent write! 5/5, looking forward to reading more of these!

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Everytime a step was taken
    It crumbled beneath in dust
    Everything I've won and loved
    Now survives on broken trust
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    I loved that stanza. It was really well written. This whole poem was done amazely. I loved it. Flow and rhyming were good. And it was interesting to read. Awesome job! 5/5

    .x.TaLeEe.x.

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