by Resplendant Rose Jun 4, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
You catch me staring at you |
WOW! wonderfully structure poem! I truly enjoyed reading this..I'm sure many ladies out there can relate to this poem in some way, shape, or form!..Your writing is great! your truly gifted with this talent!! |
by Jessica
Wow.. this was very powerful! i loved the last stanza, it just blew me away! this shows how confused, jealous, and sad you are.. and i bet lodes of people can relate! good rhymes, flow, and descriptions! 5/5 |
by Hanna
I loved this poem, it just touched me so much. i can totally relate to this. |
by Meggie33
Great job, this poem was very deep, i loved the words choice, and something about it just made me want to keep reading, keep up the great work! |
by Dre4meR
Nice Flow...Keep Up The Good Work...:D |