I love this poem, it's really sweet and I know what you mean by love unseen. The rhyming is good and it has a good flow.

Great job! 5/5

Nice Flow...Keep Up The Good Work...:D

Great job, this poem was very deep, i loved the words choice, and something about it just made me want to keep reading, keep up the great work!

**meggie**

I loved this poem, it just touched me so much. i can totally relate to this.

Wow.. this was very powerful! i loved the last stanza, it just blew me away! this shows how confused, jealous, and sad you are.. and i bet lodes of people can relate! good rhymes, flow, and descriptions! 5/5

WOW! wonderfully structure poem! I truly enjoyed reading this..I'm sure many ladies out there can relate to this poem in some way, shape, or form!..Your writing is great! your truly gifted with this talent!!
-Chels