Forbidden Love

Not one of my favorites but still very well done. The poem didn't seem to catch my eye or grab my attention like the other ones have. I still think that you did a great job on it even though it's not one of my favorites. Still, another great peice of work! God Bless 5/5
<3Tayyy

The tiltle was so catchy and passionate, that i was kind of disappointed with the poem. Just some honest feedback.
"and I can't touch!" i think you should change that to, "but I can't touch" it makes more sense. This reminds me of a secret crush you want so bad, but you cant get him. Just take what i said into consideration. Good job!
4/5

I loved this.
''His gf needs to die'' ''drown him here?'' both made me laugh, maybe I just have a sick sense of humor

It was a nice poem... you need to put in more advanced vocab and the flow was a little off on the second to last stanza... it was really a nice poem though, keep up the good work

Oh jeez. Probably the most demented love poem I've read. You've got the darkness going for you.

Advice: Use more details. There really wasn't any emotion besides anger. Where's the love?