Great poem i abolutely LOVE the message! So true! The flow is a little off in a few places, but it makes it all the more unique and the message behind the words makes up for it! So So SO true! Much appreciated.

WOW i was kind of surprised this poem flowed terrificly....I loved how you told us what we do nad then said wht you were doing..this si vry rare but this is THE BEST poem on this site! keep it up and i look forward to reading more....also please please please readas many of my poems as you can...thxns.

Lissa

Another favourite, i particularly liked the ending.

Trends...suck!
Okay, some don't, but some do.
Like looking like girls in magazines!
-.-
Those people piss me off.
Anyways.
Beautifully penned.
I loved it.
& I love you.
5/5

I really liked this one, it has to be my favorite by you, this really spoke to my heart, and soul this time, the deep emtion was powerful, the word choice again blew me away
the vocab screamed out for attention, and the flow was absoulty flawless, this has to be the best poem i have read all night long 5/5

Wow.
I know it's strange.
But I see little red riding hood on this one.
I don't know.

It had a nursery thing going on with it.
It's probably just me, though.
Lol.

Perfection = beauty, Or so they do say,
Fakeness = Weakness, In every single way.
Weakness isn't beauty, But in the very end,
Perfection = Fakeness, It's just another trend.

Love that part, m'dear.

Your punctuation was kind of strange.
You used a lot of commas in there.
If you look at them like a normal sentence.
That wouldn't work out.

I don't know.
It's as if there's a punctuation that needs to be done.
Other than that, though.
It's alright.
I love the beat that's happening.
But still, nothing really caught my eye.

Wow it really describes that figurative ladies..and you bet that they have some hurt inside and they get this way in order not to show their hurt..really interesting thought..I liked it
Keep it up,
Laura

Your poems just keep getting better, seriously. I'm in love with your work.

Perfection = beauty, Or so they do say,
Fakeness = Weakness, In every single way.
Weakness isn't beauty, But in the very end,
Perfection = Fakeness, It's just another trend.

^^ Oh my gosh! That's just amazing. I wish I was clever enough to come up with stuff like this. It's so very true too. Perfection is just another trend. What a stunning way to end a poem, this will definitely stick out in people's mind.

I like the short lines here, they make the poem flow really nicely. It's hard to do short lines because you have to make the words say so much.

I really have nothing to criticize. I'm trying so hard to find something you could fix or change, but really, I can't find anything.

Amazing poem, written by an amazing poet.

Keep writing!
Cayce

This was really well done!!!
You have really great talent from what ive red. i like that you added that end bit it finished the poem off nicely. your wording was really great and said alot in each line. i really enjoyed this poem.

Very well done. Keep up your good work!
*Hunny*