by Ben Jun 4, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
I'm lost within your eyes, |
Hey ben |
EEK!!! ASK HER OUT! : P (Oh Jesus, I hope I understood the poem right ^_^). Did you go out together? OH MY GOD! EMAIL ME AND TELL ME EVERYTHINGGG. -hearrtttt-. Great poem dear, I think it was nice. Repetition was a little much this time, but still good. love! |
by Tara Kay
I dunno, i liked it, but the rhyming seemed forced and it didnt flow quite well. but it was still good. |