Love passion flames and fire

by jen   Jun 4, 2006


When everything seems okay
there she stands with her razor blade

because scares cant lie
and old habits never die

to u its just a game
to gain power and make shame

but to her it is her life
that stands in the balance

it starts and you curse
and she swears to god

she presses the razor upon her scared skin
tonight its too late

the blood on her arm
as she slices her wrist
and you scream out your lungs

all covered in soot
the fire glows strong

the fight had began
and you wish it was gone

she slices again
this one with more depth

she cant move her fingers
and she pulls back her neck

she screams up to god
and you watch her just bleed

she falls to the floor
you run to her need

she says i love you
you say so long

you cry out your eyes
knowing your love will live on

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  • 18 years ago

    by Benny Cheung

    Wow thats a very strong and moving poem, excellent display of emotions there. Fantastic 5/5.
    p.s if u can give me you opinion on my poems cheers.

  • 18 years ago

    by SaveMe?

    Aww thats so sad and moving but
    its an absoulatly amazing poem!
    these were two great lines:
    because scares cant lie
    and old habits never die
    great work keep it up
    5/5
    lovelove
    Alice
    xxxxx