Aww thats so sad and moving but
its an absoulatly amazing poem!
these were two great lines:
because scares cant lie
and old habits never die
great work keep it up
5/5
lovelove
Alice
xxxxx

Wow thats a very strong and moving poem, excellent display of emotions there. Fantastic 5/5.
p.s if u can give me you opinion on my poems cheers.