You pull me towards you
And lightly touch my lips
It sends shivers up my spine
And my eyes glitter with excitement
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Loved that part! And this poem was so cute. It kinda reminded me of my first kiss. It was soooooo sweeet. Lol. Another very cute and good poem, and the imagry was great. I could really picture a boy and a girl having there first kiss. Awesome job! Oh and I do hope this one is true =P 5/5

.x.TaLeEe.x.

You did such a great job with this
=)
keep it up

Oh my god ! i haveing trouble to not get emotional reading this (yes that is a good thing).it is really good

Awww, soooo sweet, i could picture the scenery and the lovers, is a good poem, it really made me smile, well done 5/5

sarah xx

You pull me towards you
And lightly touch my lips
It sends shivers up my spine
And my eyes glitter with excitement

-- Very beautiful. I hope my first kiss is like this. Well done, Jessy!

Aww i loved i loved it!!!!! it kinda reminded me of my first kiss but that was a nerve wreak anyway i loved it ur awsome keep up the good work n dont be a stranger hun 5/5 always
kate

That is sooo beautiful!!

THsi poem is very sweet. I love it. I was able to picture it very clearly.

Heh, this was SO cute. The imagery was out in the open and left just enough to the imagination. I loved it! So simple, yet so delicate.

-Tony

Aww what a perfect first kiss! wish mine was like this. mine was in a garage haha. love it. great writing.

Wow, this was a touching poem. it rare to have such a perfect first kiss. another cute poem, you did a good job on creating an image for everyone.. well done keep it up

OMG! So sweet! Lol 5/5 Keep up the good work!

-Stephanie-

This sent shivers up my spine just like in the poem itself. it was amazing writing and very descriptive 5/5

Awe.
This is coote. The sea part at the end was really nice.
And you described it all so well.
Really sweet.
And enjoyable to read.
Well dones!
x

Holy Moly! What a write! It made me giggle...HAHA like a little school girl HAHA NNIICCCEE!! I LOVE the way you ended it...that was perfect!!!!

Nice work here!!! :)

You did a very very very good job!!♥Sammy♥

Very sweet poem indeed. I can definitely feel the magic in the air... A couple of comments if I may... first, "waters" should be "water" and second, the last 2 sentence of the first stanza doesn't sound quite right... you may want to consider the following...

As we stood watching the sunset
With sand between our toes
And clear water flowing against our legs
Time froze for a magical moment
And not a sound to disturb

Overall... it was a good write. 5/5

AWWWWWWWWWW.....that is soooo cute
Love me
Jennifer

That was very sweet...nice work

Wow, you set the perfect setting, and i could visulize it all! you put in good despcriptions, which is good.