by Navy SweetHeart Jun 4, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
love, friendship
You were suppose to be able to lean back on me. |
Hey, I liked that alot, but I'm sure you didnt like your sister/brother down too badly, dont feel bad about it. |
by kayla
Hey this poem is good. and donr worry bout the past your here for me now and thats good |
by Jessica
Aww.. i liked that one, it was sweet and very sincere.. its like your paying for your betrayal.. the repitition worked pretty well in this poem and it flowed nicely. just one problem, you spelt the word wrong, it should be "supposed" not "suppose" good write! |
by Megann Lee
I agree. I liked it. :) I thought it was creative and well written. So Good job. ^^ |
I like it.. good job |