I like it.. good job

I agree. I liked it. :) I thought it was creative and well written. So Good job. ^^

Aww.. i liked that one, it was sweet and very sincere.. its like your paying for your betrayal.. the repitition worked pretty well in this poem and it flowed nicely. just one problem, you spelt the word wrong, it should be "supposed" not "suppose" good write!

Hey this poem is good. and donr worry bout the past your here for me now and thats good

Hey, I liked that alot, but I'm sure you didnt like your sister/brother down too badly, dont feel bad about it.

Much love

Steph