Comments : What is Love ?

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Aww.. that was sweet! it flowed well, but the rhyming didn't last the whole way through.. this had good descriptions and made me smile! :)

    Realised to late?
    ^ here it should be "too" not "to"

    Perhaps a dying tradtion
    ^ should be "tradition" not "tradtion"

    Perhaps You are Love an I am Love?
    ^ should make "You" and "Love" lower case letter, and it should be "and" not "an"

    good write! really enjoyed reading it! 5/5