One Heart

Beautiful.. its just like u sed, i reli goes straight to the heart.. its very very sad, tho..i just loved it.. i liked ur rhyme scheme and the flow was good.. most importantly, ur diction and imagery were amazing.. it blew me away.. i just love metaphorical lines in poetry (tho i find a hard time getting them on my own work)..

i loved the whole poem, but my favorite stanza was ur last.. i think it brought the whole poem together.. moreover, it stood out.. nice way of ending ur piece..

just absolutely great
keep up the talent
take care
NannO

p.s. im sorry about ur love, u WILL love again, dont worry :) im just glad that something so painful can create something as good as this piece of work

p.s.s. thnx a lot 4 ur comment.. much appreciated

I think you expressed your feelings very well in this poem, even though it may not be true. But it doesn't have to be true in order for you to feel it, so great job. I love the descriptions and the whole flow of the poem. Great Job!
Take care, love. God Bless

Wow, if i have ever seen a good poem, it wouldnt be this one.... I think this is the best Poem i have ever read

I hecka lyk this!
ur gud at wut cha doin .
chay

Wow
its a beautiful but sad and touching in the same time

keep smiling you will get though this time and thenyou will find someone better

all the best
Lana