This is not love

by claire   Jun 4, 2006


My love is one i know so well,
but he does not know me.
does he know I'm going through hell,
does he really see.

the pain and torture that i feel,
will never be enough some how.
does he want me to get down and kneel,
it would only start a row.

so I'm here to tell my story,
of love that has been lost.
the pain, happiness and glory,
is not enough for most.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lestat

    Great stuff
    Keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Unique4eva

    SHUT UP! You said u wern't as good as I was at writting but u SOOOO are. Don't put ur self down. U got to believe in ur self girl!

    Brillant work though!

  • 18 years ago

    by Tiffany

    Thats a great poem i love it great work hun

    xx

  • 18 years ago

    by lisa

    I like this poem its really good youve got talent 5/5 xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by smile

    Wow great poem
    i really really liked it
    i can totally relate to it

    good work!!!!

    **smile**

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