Wow thats really deep and kinda freaky but i love it as do i all of your work keep it up 5/5 for me

Wow I don't even know what I'm feeling.. that poem was intense and well written. I'm impressed
5/5

Wow...this is amasing...it had a lot of feeling to it...unbelievable...wow

Wow...it's so vivid...it pulls at ur emotions...takes ur breath away...there's just so much to it...so much pain...and all of it is felt by the reader...u r a great writer...i luv this one...keep up the wonderful work...