Every Time

by *~Brittaney~*   Jun 4, 2006


When I'm with you baby,
my whole world shuts down,
it put on a pause and it's just us two, me and you.

Cause' when I'm with you baby nothing else matter's.
It's a different kind of love, each and every time we touch.

Even when your not near i never have to think of fear cuz i just dream of your face, the space is just distance. You'll always have my heart no matter how far we are apart.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Nee

    You know your poem was very loving and enjoyable!!!
    just try to split it up into lines and stanzas..that would be better and easier for us to read!

    the poem is so sweet and lovely written..just try to follow my advice!
    Keep it up
    Luv
    NemO XxXxXxXxX

  • 18 years ago

    by *Daniel94*

    That was nice and sweet, i know that no one is gonna leave critisism on this master piece.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awww.. thats so sweet.. the flow was pretty good and there was lots of emotion, but i think that the poem could benefit from an actual poem form.. instead of looking like a paragraph. it will be a lot easier to read and i bet more people will read it if it looks more spaced out! nice write! 5/5 p.s. whats up with your rating?? Rating : 1.0 / -1

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