Awww.. thats so sweet.. the flow was pretty good and there was lots of emotion, but i think that the poem could benefit from an actual poem form.. instead of looking like a paragraph. it will be a lot easier to read and i bet more people will read it if it looks more spaced out! nice write! 5/5 p.s. whats up with your rating?? Rating : 1.0 / -1

That was nice and sweet, i know that no one is gonna leave critisism on this master piece.

You know your poem was very loving and enjoyable!!!
just try to split it up into lines and stanzas..that would be better and easier for us to read!

the poem is so sweet and lovely written..just try to follow my advice!
Keep it up
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