Untill the last beat of my heart.

by Navy SweetHeart   Jun 4, 2006


As i look into your eyes and wave goodbye,
i feel a sense of sadness as i want this moment to last forever.

as you hold me tight and tell me you never want to let me go,
i feel a sense of sadness as i want this moment to last forever.

when i talk to you and you say i got to go,
i feel a sense of sadness as i want this moment to last forever.

face it wish i could be with you forever.
i wish i could look into your eyes as you hold me tight and just talk to you forever.

as much as i wish i know that could never happen as there is no such thing.

so i just hope to God that we will be together until the last beat of my heart......

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  • 18 years ago

    by kelS;

    Awee yeah i like this poem is soo sweet!

  • 18 years ago

    by kayla

    Hey mami, i loved your poem i really l;iked it!! did you give that one to nathen yet?? didi he like it??
    xoxo kayla

  • 18 years ago

    by holly

    I love this lovely repetitioona and i LOVED the last line. really sweet great job :D ALLYxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    This was a pretty good poem.. i like the last line, it really stands out for me.. i kinda got bored with the repitition of "forever" over and over again, i found that it lost some of its meaning after a while. so maybe, if you could find different words for that it would improve the poem. all in all though, good write!

  • 18 years ago

    by -Ghostship Fidelity-

    Heh, much better then the last one I read I must admit! Very neat formatting of it. And it seemed to make an impact on me with it's simple words. Keep on writing.

    -Tony

    5/5

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