This poem is really sweet, I love the message, it's so sincere. The ending was perfect, and I liked the title.

Great job! 5/5

Awwww that's so cute!

I love it. it sad but a great poem.

I love it. it sad but a great poem.

Heh, much better then the last one I read I must admit! Very neat formatting of it. And it seemed to make an impact on me with it's simple words. Keep on writing.

-Tony

5/5

This was a pretty good poem.. i like the last line, it really stands out for me.. i kinda got bored with the repitition of "forever" over and over again, i found that it lost some of its meaning after a while. so maybe, if you could find different words for that it would improve the poem. all in all though, good write!

I love this lovely repetitioona and i LOVED the last line. really sweet great job :D ALLYxx

Hey mami, i loved your poem i really l;iked it!! did you give that one to nathen yet?? didi he like it??
xoxo kayla

Awee yeah i like this poem is soo sweet!