I like it, its simple yet complicated, its from the heart,

Good poem, it makes a lot of sense. Very real.

It is pretty obvious that you have some problems with your father-maybe someday-he will realize what he has lost and that time cannot be brought back for him and what he has thrown away. Feelings in this are very obvious-your father is a lucky man to have a child still love him after his own selfishness!

I stayed logged in and my grandma typed that!!! not me... sorry about that people..

Thats awesome!! im sorry ur dad left hun im an! i wish he had stayd for you...