Comments : Such a smile...

  • 18 years ago

    by Sammi

    I loved the last stanza. It was simple and pretty in a dark sort of way... 5 for 5.

  • 18 years ago

    by Colby

    Hey great poem...I can relate so well...

  • 18 years ago

    by struggling

    I really l love this it really describes me.Thanks.5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Amazingggggggggggg....wow..hunn awesome!!

    Lissa xoox

  • 18 years ago

    by Willow

    Thats beautiful. u have really good writting talent. 5/5.
    love willow xxooxxoo

  • 17 years ago

    by LoreNz0

    Wow this is a very powerful and moving poem. great :D