Hold Me Close...

by .::Lovely*Letdown::.   Jun 5, 2006


Mutual feelings begin to show
Under the stars, i lose control
It's funny how everything seems to be ok
Under a far away universe we lay and make our silent connections without any words.
No words have to be spoken because our actions say it all.
Our fingers entwine and you whisper in my ear
You ward off all bugs, because you know i'm scared ... (haha wink wink)
Make this moment last forever
Keep me in your arms, safe and warm.
You know my weaknesses, so make me tremble in the knees.
you know the right thing to say.
Don't be afraid to take a chance, because I'm forever waiting.
Hold me close, and let me know you'll always be there.
I need you now, so hold me close and NEVER let me go...

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  • 17 years ago

    by Lemon Square Bear23

    No words have to be spoken because our actions say it all. i like that part alot its so m=true and i like the end..hold me close and NEVER let me go i think it was i liked it keep up the good work 5/5 always
    Kate~

  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    This is good...i liked the first two stanzas the best...then this part..

    You ward off all bugs, because you know i'm scared ... (haha wink wink)

    i thought it made the poem a lot more personal i dunno lol i think tht it was cool but yeah definatly 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by MiSsEdHeArT

    This is a good poem Jessie! Good Job! Luv Ya! Bye

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