Comments : Hold Me Close...

  • 18 years ago

    by MiSsEdHeArT

    This is a good poem Jessie! Good Job! Luv Ya! Bye

  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    This is good...i liked the first two stanzas the best...then this part..

    You ward off all bugs, because you know i'm scared ... (haha wink wink)

    i thought it made the poem a lot more personal i dunno lol i think tht it was cool but yeah definatly 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Lemon Square Bear23

    No words have to be spoken because our actions say it all. i like that part alot its so m=true and i like the end..hold me close and NEVER let me go i think it was i liked it keep up the good work 5/5 always
    Kate~