by Andrea Jun 5, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
The stars are falling on me and now I'm starting to bleed these words are losing control with no place to go They say I'm losing my mind and now I'm all out of time what's the reason you're not here you said you'd always be there now I'm falling apart like the stars in the sky now it's getting darker without you by my side come back to me so I can set you free and show you how it feels to bleed. |
Oh wow, very well penned. I really liked the ending. Keep up the good work. 5/5 :) |
by ShaunaMarie
It'd be better if it were in poetic form, but it's good. |