by Megann Lee Jun 5, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Silence stricken room, broken by a loud Devilish Cachinnation. |
5/5....that was EXCELLENT!!! At first i thought that the guy was really the Devil and that the girl was his puppet but then you explained it and i was awed!!!...You use a lot of big words..lol..thats not a bad thing...i just thought i'd point that out,,,anyways keep writting these amazing poems~~ |
by AnnMarie
Wow really long......whew did i MENTION it was long??? |
Although I didn't understand all the words in the first couple of stanzas the images were very clear. |
by Dana
Ok.....wow! I'm sorry i don't know really what else to say. This poem both confused and aroused my attention! The diction was just amazing!....WOW! |
by Sar
A really good unique poem, well done |