by TwistedHarmony Jun 5, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
She stares me down. we break eye contact and i feel the snap as we part. Something inside me boils over... I feel the sickening clench, churning inside my stomach. I feel it rise in the back of my throat and burn past my lips. I imagine me... Wrapping my fingers around her pretty little throat |
by Genevieve
It's got a great story, but there's no structure to it. It was like reading an essay, and essay with a great story, but still and essay. I liked your passion, but it does need some kind of format. |