by stranger than most Jun 5, 2006
category :
Life, society /
faith, religion
Why do we have different religions |
by Tiny Reader
You have some good ideas in here to start off a poem, but the way you have put it, it has little structure and does not seem like a poem. Read other some poems with a lot of ratings and comments and you'll see the type of poem that flows the best. This will help you to get your message across in a stronger way. |