Hey,
i really like your poem its so true we spend all our time looking for something we know we'll never have and we take forgranted what we do have the important stuff like friends i always took forgranted my friends i just figured they'd always be there then we got in a huge fight last year and now we don't even talk and i'm trying deprestly to hold on but its hard with out them. well i really liked your poem keep up the god work!
Sarah

I love this poem, Mark. good message. i think it's one of your best yet. =)

i love you.

All too true

Mark-Man, I think this is one of your best yet. I thought I had read this, But obviously I hadn't. So I did =D Taha.
But I liked it alot. It was beautiful!!

And why did you go off msn? It's only 10:34pm? Oh wait, You have school tomorrow, Don't ya? Hm, I think I'm gonna have to do that dance for my friend, She just keeps asking and asking lol. So I'll just give in eventually. Ha, I'm just rambling on about nothing, So yeah. I'll shut-up now =) ..No, Wait, I'm not finished yet. My mice are pregnant, Well, The girl is. But it's been like forever and she still hasn't had the babies yet? Okay, I'm done now.

`Taleee. xx.

Wow i loved this one as much as i said the other one was the best ive read so far but this was the best ive read in ONE YEAR lol i like this poem alot so much passion and i loveeeeeeee it its like my own borther ( i love ma bro we never fight lol) but still u deserve a medal like hell dude!! xoxroxyxox