It was good but sad =(

This was a very sad poem.i liked it.xoxo

Great poem! Very sad but powerful, I loved the suspenseful ending. Keep up your great work, and thank you for your comment on my poem! xxx

Wow, I really liked those first two lines, they were so powerful. The rhymes in this poem were really good. I enjoyed it. A very nice write. You ended it so well. I've had times where I felt like this.. so sad, but then there way a small spot of light. Awesome poem.

PS. I can be your dessert? Will I be ice-cream or cake?.. or something different : P

Oh my god... this is an amazing poem... i like the rhyming... dark honesty... just my taste