Not bad

Wow beautiful Darien.
Hope this girl feels special because this is one of the most flattering poems I've read. Great job

REALLY GOOD! great poem! I love LOVE POEMS! 5/5

Another amazing poem! When it comes to love poems you are definitly one of the best!

The only comment I have is the line pair of

Night time calls for a prayer,
The one I made this year.

seems a little awkward for some reason. I think maybe I don't like the second line, or it's too short or something.

As a whole I love the poem, it's beautiful. But those two lines stick out like a sore thumb for me and I dunno why.

This is really sweet and sentimental - I liked how the rhyming is flawless and not forced, despite it also being 'confined' to the form (acrostic). It all reads in a very romantic way but doesn't come off sounding cliched or mushy - nice job :)

Awwwwwwww that is sooooo sweet..i had a guy kind of like that once..but that's a totally different story! you did a great great job..you are really a great writer

Nicely done. The flow is good as well as the rhyming.

Very sweet poem. i like it:)

Really sweet. i love acrostics, totally kool. congrats.

Once again...wonderful! i am not too sure i fully understand this one tho.....?

This is my favorite poem of yours I've read so far. It is more complex than your other poems with deeper meaning. 5/5

I really like this one. Very original. Short but very sweet. We need more people to write about there Faith in God.
5/5
-chris

This is such a great write. It is truelt written with an angelic touch and heavenly worded.
5/5

God Bless

Chris

This is absolutely beautiful. Wonderful flow and rythm.
It is certainly written from the heart.
Absolutely delightful. 5/5

Nice Acrostic! Great use of words as usual.
I loved the " Angels yearn to hear her talk."

A bit short, and I'm not sure I liked the ending, but the rest was astounding. Great poem, Darien.

xDarkSuicidex 4.5

I loved this, it was so sweet.
I liked the rhyme scheme and imagery in this.

WOW... thats really all I can say about this one...WOW! Again 5/5