Did You Notice

by Sarah Ann   Jun 5, 2006


Did you notice how the stars are shining down on us tonight
And how the lights keep on reflecting in your eyes that shine so bright
I'm so sure of loving this time as were walking hand in hand
And I will keep this my small secret since no one would understand

Did you notice how our footprints are sinking deeply in the ground
How the scene is just so right and this love feels so profound
I'm so sure that this time it's all real as you lean in for a kiss
This moment makes up for many things, for everything I missed

Did you notice how my mind is faulting deeply in your eyes
How there's nothing else that matters as we lay under the skies
I'm so sure that you're the one for me as you whisper in my ear
Deeply in love I watch you as you brush away a tear

Did you notice how my happiness has never been this true
How through all my hardships as I fought, I fell in love with you
I'm so sure I love you dearly; the feeling is vivid in the air
Just promise me you're here for me and say you'll always care

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  • 18 years ago

    by Bloomed Rose

    I LOVED IT! you could really feel the emotion it. 5/5 for me too
    Bloomed Rose

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Amazing poem...wow it just makes me want to feel such a perfect moment.
    You expressed it so beautifully.
    I hope it's true and that you're this happy:P
    Great poem 5/5
    >torn -x.x.x-

    xoxoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephanie and Laura

    So beautifully written i really enjoyed it
    keep up the good work
    thanks for the comment
    keep the talent keep the faith keep the ability to write beautifully

    Laura

  • 18 years ago

    by Brooke

    This is breathtaking. So much emotion and love. Very amazing!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Lily

    This poem is beautiful, your words flow, and your words make u feel as if you are there on this night. I think that you are very talented, keep writing.