by Natalie Jun 5, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
[Verse 1] |
by Leah20
Nice work! I love everything about this poem.. I wish that I could hear it put to music. Keep it up! |
by holly
Great lyrics! i loved it catchy and easy to relate too. |
by Kaylee
As I was reading this, I Was singing it in my head and it really is a nice song. I especially loved how you had the word before inside (). It gave it a different sort of touch. I'm assuming that's for back up singers but I could be wrong. I'd love to hear this played someday as with all your songs. Your third stanza is the only thing I didn't really care for. I don't know it just didn't seem to fit right but other than that another amazing job. Hope that you can sing lol because these songs should be heard. |
by Oceansoul
Very good lyrics, just very curious now on which kinda music you would do this?could see alanis morissette sing something like this :)) |
by MudkipzPlx
Love it just love it. Don't care what anyone says. *Shakes our heads* We love it and thats all that counts. >_> Hehe. Well others count. but it was lovley. Great Job yet again M'Dear. |