by Lisa Jun 5, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Each night, I lay upon my bed, |
by Sourav
Nice poem! Wonderfully written! Great work! |
Excellent poem! Keep it up! |
Oh Lisa, in your words I can feel the pain, although you call it fiction..it brings up feelings of confusion, like the person has alot of thinking to do, I can see alot of ppl relating to this . Denise |
by Timothy r
Lisa, even though this is fiction, it felt quite real, a very nice piece of imagery here, fantastic .Love, Tim |
Awww how sad..Stay up!...By the way..Nice poem |