Awww how sad..Stay up!...By the way..Nice poem

Lisa, even though this is fiction, it felt quite real, a very nice piece of imagery here, fantastic .Love, Tim

Oh Lisa, in your words I can feel the pain, although you call it fiction..it brings up feelings of confusion, like the person has alot of thinking to do, I can see alot of ppl relating to this . Denise

Excellent poem! Keep it up!

Nice poem! Wonderfully written! Great work!