Oh it took me back to the photos i saw recently of the hiroshima bombing victims...shockingly devasting, raw and real emotions captured in those pics just as you have captured in your poem Chelsey. A great poem written with your usual empathy for humanity and anyone you come into contact with :O) Loved it although it did brings tears to my eyes...
Love and hugs Eirisa

Awee. Thats such a sad story...I actually had to choke back my tears when i read this. You told this so good that i don't even think a comment can explain it...5/5 :)
-Jenna xo

Wow Chelsey, this is such a fantastic write. It was a sad sad story, and it almost brought tears to my eyes, until I saw that you wrote God, and I knew there was going to be some hope. You have a really good way of writing inspirational stories, true or not true, you are great at it. This was so touching. War really does bring out the worst in times, but it always leave a great story like this one. Amazing write Chels, really it is.

Wow... what a moving poem!! A sad, heart breaking write while having a splendid fulilling ending!