Very good..the dedication is beautiful..I enjoyed reading this...thanks for your comments..5/5

Hey hunni!

This poem has a really nice message, I was touched. You have a great perspective on the world around you, I wish more people would take that view of life. You poem was amazing, but I couldn't help feel that your presentation (the prose paragraphs) kind of took away from your poem a bit, if that makes any sense. I understand that every artist does their own thing, but maybe when you have some time you might want to see what you can do about giving it a strong poetic format. But still, I think your poem was brilliant hun. Nice job.

-Tainted Mikochan

Interesting! 5/5