At times....

by Lisa   Jun 5, 2006


At times....
you placed me underneath a rock
As if everything in your life was more important.
You acted as if I was the last thing on your agenda,
like you didn't care about me
At other times...
you made me your number one
made it seems as if everything revolve around me.
You made my heart smile and laugh,
talking to you warmth the inside of me.

I miss those times.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kerry

    Great poem. I know what you mean about inconsistanty but the only thing I can say improve on is flow...keep writing.

  • 18 years ago

    by Vanessa Lea

    Very well done.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Aww i love this poem i can totally relate to this poem and it has alot of feelings love it... keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Joyo

    Good poem!! I liked it very much. I loved this piece:" You made my heart smile and laugh,
    talking to you warmth the inside of me. " it's so deep and I can truly understand what you want to express in this poem. good job, keep it up! ;) 5/5 (and thanx a lot for your comment on my poem. ;) )

  • 18 years ago

    by Sophia

    Its all good ur a really good poet

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