Thats a great poem n thanks 4 the comment n not the vote!

Its all good ur a really good poet

Good poem!! I liked it very much. I loved this piece:" You made my heart smile and laugh,
talking to you warmth the inside of me. " it's so deep and I can truly understand what you want to express in this poem. good job, keep it up! ;) 5/5 (and thanx a lot for your comment on my poem. ;) )

Aww i love this poem i can totally relate to this poem and it has alot of feelings love it... keep it up

Very well done.

Great poem. I know what you mean about inconsistanty but the only thing I can say improve on is flow...keep writing.